2 1/2 Minute short film

Thanks everyone for the feed back and constructive criticism. Especially you, Jdanstan! Your thoughts on the acting are dead on and I will take your some of your advice with me the next time I shoot something. Thanks for taking the time.

As far as the surprise goes, I'm glad at least some people were surprised!
 
I liked the short a lot.

Very creative for 1-setup.

The actors left me a little cold and the dialogue was a little on the nose, but other than that, I thought it was great.

One question, did you ever considering fading out to white instead of black at the end?

Chris
 
I like it just way it is...except the first fade was a little too long. The clock was perfect and the blood was not needed. The cool part was the story...it was well told without a lot of extra stuff, just sweet and to the point. Good job.
 
I had thought about using white as a fade device, but I kind of wanted to keep it sort of dark at the end. White might have indicated some sort of hope, which I didn't want...
 
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