15 years old director's short film

Concept and story, were ok ... Nothing really that stood out as "amazing" to me though.

What did bother me though was the Severely out of focus shots, the obnoxiously loud music , sloppy camera movement, etc.
From a technical standpoint I think this is a mess and unless you were famous, there's no way in Heck anyone would give a project like this a green light.

My suggestions would be, is to concentrate more on the story instead of these out of focus micro jitter shots.
 
Couldn't really understand this one, maybe language barrier but visuals weren't that bad when you managed to get focus. Keep it up and welcome to the forum.
 
thanks for the input

the jitter and out of focus shots are supposed to be part of the "style of the film" (I guess its a fail).

we also made cleaner things

 
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