Luis Caffesse
Admin
James, you never said this was to be critiqued as a music video.
You presented it as footage you shot at the RNC demonstrations, which led pretty much everyone to assume it was to be seen as a doc.
And everything you said in response was about the events themselves, and how you wanted to present them.
You never once mentioned the music, the band, or the fact that this was a music video.
So I can't say I'm surprised when others saw it as a documentary short of the events of the day.
If this is a music video - well, then that's a whole different story.
Though given your response, I'm not sure what you want to hear from people.
The video is essentially a propaganda piece, with heavy imagery and titles that clearly push a specific viewpoint.
But if you don't want us to discuss the presentation in regards to the content (and only in respect to the music) that doesn't leave much to discuss.
As far as how this plays as a music video - personally I would say it is rather heavy handed and takes the focus away from the music itself.
That said, I feel you used the beat of the music well - but, given that you're working with event footage,
without knowing what else was shot it's difficult to critique the edit itself.
Just my two cents.
You presented it as footage you shot at the RNC demonstrations, which led pretty much everyone to assume it was to be seen as a doc.
And everything you said in response was about the events themselves, and how you wanted to present them.
You never once mentioned the music, the band, or the fact that this was a music video.
So I can't say I'm surprised when others saw it as a documentary short of the events of the day.
If this is a music video - well, then that's a whole different story.
Though given your response, I'm not sure what you want to hear from people.
The video is essentially a propaganda piece, with heavy imagery and titles that clearly push a specific viewpoint.
But if you don't want us to discuss the presentation in regards to the content (and only in respect to the music) that doesn't leave much to discuss.
As far as how this plays as a music video - personally I would say it is rather heavy handed and takes the focus away from the music itself.
That said, I feel you used the beat of the music well - but, given that you're working with event footage,
without knowing what else was shot it's difficult to critique the edit itself.
Just my two cents.