Myopia- by EduardoMiguel

I like really the mysterious atmosphere in your film. Compliments. Unfortunately I didn't understand the story. I am so sorry, but the film didn't convinced me completely. All my best wishes for the next fest.

Susanne
 
I think the story is a little bit confusing. I still don't know what happened between the two girls. The bar scene has too much background noise. However, you have some nice cinematic shots. The music suits the theme very well. You did a nice job. Congrats!
 
Sorry, but I looked everywhere and just couldn't find the story. You had some good images but this felt like an experimental piece.
 
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I’m not sure I have much to say about this film. It had some good moments in the montage, but does nothing really for the story. The premise was ok along with the editing, but I’m not sure I got the story.

Congrats on entering the fest.
 
I will keep my remarks short since I am sure due to my late response most has already been covered. I have no idea what this film was about. At first I thought maybe it was a rip off the "The Eye" but as it progressed I realized I really have no clue what the story was about. Most of the shots were good and the editing was well done, you were able to create a mysterious effect especially with the flash cuts and score. Definitly has potential, but in its current state I'm just not getting it.

Good job and good luck!
 
I didn't really understand the storyline although I thought some of the shots were good.

Thank you.
 
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