24/7 - A ZazaCast Film
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Cool twilight zone vibe to the poster.
Welcome and looking forward to your entry sir.
:beer:
Welcome and looking forward to your entry sir.
:beer:
Simon Höfer
Veteran
Haha, congrats i guess 
You finished your short? You are a filmmaker
You get better everytime you make one!
You finished your short? You are a filmmaker
You get better everytime you make one!
Gary Sconce
Veteran
I like Sparkus Maximus! :love4:
ZazaCast
Major Contributor
...and you should see his contract rider; custom trailer, catnip, fresh litter....it never ends! :2vrolijk_08:
Existentialist
Well-known member
That still of the cat is just awesome!!
Susanne G.
Well-known member
Hello ZazaCast,
you must be really crazy to make a film alone. After my first film experience with this TimeFest competition, I understood above all: more time and more crew you have, better it is!
Best wishes and lots of luck.
Susanne
you must be really crazy to make a film alone. After my first film experience with this TimeFest competition, I understood above all: more time and more crew you have, better it is!
Best wishes and lots of luck.
Susanne
Dustin R. Rogan
Silent Bob's Evil Twin
good luck sir!
ZazaCast
Major Contributor
Thanks Susanne...and yes crazy IS my middle name! I'm just happy to have made a film and have it approved. Can't wait to see yours.
Cheers & best of luck to you and your crew,
-Za
Drew Ott
Wish I were banned.
Nice short.
I'm not sure I understand exactly what you were trying to say but I still enjoyed guessing what was going to happen next.
I thought the introduction was a little bit long for such a short time limit. Acting also felt a lot like they were just reading the script. I could see this being a good script but the acting stopped me from believing everything that was happening though.
Great work though. Congrats on getting a finished film. Can't wait to see your next one.
I'm not sure I understand exactly what you were trying to say but I still enjoyed guessing what was going to happen next.
I thought the introduction was a little bit long for such a short time limit. Acting also felt a lot like they were just reading the script. I could see this being a good script but the acting stopped me from believing everything that was happening though.
Great work though. Congrats on getting a finished film. Can't wait to see your next one.
Mattykins
Cute Member
Zaza,
I liked the pacing. Felt like a music video. And music is the thing you do.
I liked the contrast with the fast paced music and searching and the guy walking in the woods. I also liked the appearance of the weed at a minute and change in. Haha.
The reading of the lines sounded like a...book on tape. Which is kinda relaxing. I liked the butterfly effect deal going on. It was quite exquisite the tree deal.
The lines did feel a little forced. It had an interesting feel to it for sure. I did like the opening camera move and the second take of it at 4 minutes and change.
Overall I enjoyed it. It was a good watch. Looking forward to your next piece.
Oh, I liked how the walking seemed to match the music at 4:late.
I liked the pacing. Felt like a music video. And music is the thing you do.
I liked the contrast with the fast paced music and searching and the guy walking in the woods. I also liked the appearance of the weed at a minute and change in. Haha.
The reading of the lines sounded like a...book on tape. Which is kinda relaxing. I liked the butterfly effect deal going on. It was quite exquisite the tree deal.
The lines did feel a little forced. It had an interesting feel to it for sure. I did like the opening camera move and the second take of it at 4 minutes and change.
Overall I enjoyed it. It was a good watch. Looking forward to your next piece.
Oh, I liked how the walking seemed to match the music at 4:late.
Rodney V. Smith
DVXFest Promo Guru
Good entry with solid concept (the science and theory behind it). Over all I enjoyed it, especially the twist at the end and the feeling of inevitability that led to it.
Acting was the weak point in this and could have probably done with some more blocking and a good choice of angles and actions to suit the scene. The lines did feel a little forced and it would take an excellent actor to spout the theories in a convincing way, so that aspect disappointed.
Your introduction was a little too long, especially since you seemed to have repeated the footage. If you had just gone straight into the story and gone to the time you had insteadof trying to get a 6 minute entry, it would have served your story-telling a lot stronger.
I liked some of the interesting things you did visually with the strange camera moves but have to wonder if you accomplished some of that in post. They did lend rather well to the story the odd movements.
Good entry and I hope to see more of your work soon.
Acting was the weak point in this and could have probably done with some more blocking and a good choice of angles and actions to suit the scene. The lines did feel a little forced and it would take an excellent actor to spout the theories in a convincing way, so that aspect disappointed.
Your introduction was a little too long, especially since you seemed to have repeated the footage. If you had just gone straight into the story and gone to the time you had insteadof trying to get a 6 minute entry, it would have served your story-telling a lot stronger.
I liked some of the interesting things you did visually with the strange camera moves but have to wonder if you accomplished some of that in post. They did lend rather well to the story the odd movements.
Good entry and I hope to see more of your work soon.
Dustin R. Rogan
Silent Bob's Evil Twin
I'm not going to regurgitate my points, they've been said above...(long intro, actors)
but the music was pretty good!
Rogan
but the music was pretty good!
Rogan
