ignis_fatuus
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Hello;
I am posting my first DVX100 footage, called 'Just Another Afternoon'.
http://webhome.look.ca/~nringhei/html/afternoon.html
It is an action/comedy....with the intentional feel of a home movie in the very beginning -then it changes ;-)
There are numerous mistakes I can see I've made, but I'm interested in receiving feedback regarding content, cuts, pace, etc. -mainly because I can't do anything at this point about the other issues:
Let me explain: Regarding light & long shadows- We had one full afternoon of sun, then schedules changed to an approx hour (for a couple days) before the sun set. Then to our aghast...it snowed, so we can't even finish it, or try to reshoot continuity problems.
I hope someone will enjoy it despite the problems.....Lyn
I am posting my first DVX100 footage, called 'Just Another Afternoon'.
http://webhome.look.ca/~nringhei/html/afternoon.html
It is an action/comedy....with the intentional feel of a home movie in the very beginning -then it changes ;-)
There are numerous mistakes I can see I've made, but I'm interested in receiving feedback regarding content, cuts, pace, etc. -mainly because I can't do anything at this point about the other issues:
Let me explain: Regarding light & long shadows- We had one full afternoon of sun, then schedules changed to an approx hour (for a couple days) before the sun set. Then to our aghast...it snowed, so we can't even finish it, or try to reshoot continuity problems.
I hope someone will enjoy it despite the problems.....Lyn
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