SHORT: Zombie Dating Video

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ctbullet

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Hey guys,


Here is a new comedy film. You'll be happy to know I got an actual actor in this time :)


Synopsis: Stan, 26, tall, kind and outgoing seeking similar. Don't be put off by the zombie features, I don't even like brains.




This film was made for the reed.co.uk short film competition. The theme this year is 'Ambition'. In this mockumentary style dating video we follow Stan and how he explains his zombie situation and how he still hasn't given up on looking for love. Ambition knows no bounds.


Written, Edited and Directed by
Callum Thomson (@cal_t1)


Starring Joseph Maudsley (@JosephMaudsley)
and
Callum Thomson


Camera Operator
Patrick Shelton


Sound Mixer
Ant Richardson


Make-up Artist
Emma Heath


BTS Operator
Jack Kenna


Original Music by
Graeme Osborne
www.graemeosborne.com


Let me know what you think
 
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ctbullet said:
Hey guys,


Here is a new comedy film. You'll be happy to know I got an actual actor in this time :)


Synopsis: Stan, 26, tall, kind and outgoing seeking similar. Don't be put off by the zombie features, I don't even like brains.




This film was made for the reed.co.uk short film competition. The theme this year is 'Ambition'. In this mockumentary style dating video we follow Stan and how he explains his zombie situation and how he still hasn't given up on looking for love. Ambition knows no bounds.


Written, Edited and Directed by
Callum Thomson (@cal_t1)


Starring Joseph Maudsley (@JosephMaudsley)
and
Callum Thomson


Camera Operator
Patrick Shelton


Sound Mixer
Ant Richardson


Make-up Artist
Emma Heath


BTS Operator
Jack Kenna


Original Music by
Graeme Osborne
www.graemeosborne.com


Let me know what you think
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I don't know why someone would think that dark text on slightly lighter background would be easily readable... so I didn't continue to watch the video...
 
Hey guys, any more constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated


Why not check out our BTS video too?


 
ctbullet said:
Hey guys,


Here is a new comedy film. You'll be happy to know I got an actual actor in this time :)
Click to expand...

Since I watch mostly 'without sound'... clips that have a lot of dialog have to wait until I have the time to watch them where I can turn up the sound...

My personal philosophy is that 'shorts' should be heavy on visuals, light on dialog... Narration can work, and your actor taking could lead in to a number of short 'episodes' as cut aways with his continuing as "voice over", I think would add. Having the fellow basically declaim for a minute and a half with only a couple of cutaways doesn't 'draw me in'.
 
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