Working Draft Cut of first 20 of Indie Feature

ajwwong

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Hi Gang...

I would love to get your feedback and input on a draft cut of the first 20 minutes of an Indie Feature I'm working on as writer / director / producer. It is a micro budget piece about ... well... maybe I should let you watch it before I say anything and see if you can figure it out.

If there's any parts I should cut, or places where it drags... also please let me know.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6W1bZIGAjas

I know I'm going to have to fix the audio for some of the parts... at least with the teenage girl's monologues. It just takes *forever* to render the project and then upload.... so I'll put that in with the next draft...

I know that I'm gonna have to change the music to something original... looking for composers who can work for copy / credit now.

Also, I think it might be good to get a *real* editor working on the project sometime soon... but hopefully I'm doing ok. Let me know.

Thanks for taking the time to watch!
 
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Hi... and thanks for the question.

I shot it predominantly using an HVX200 and DVX100b in a multicamera setup. Tho' occasionally, we'd use 2 DVX's.... The brief web-cam stuff was with a Canon ZR200, I think... to recreate a cheaper camera look.

Thanks for watching!
 
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