MUSIC VIDEO: We Can Be One

[Nick Royer]

I just finished post on my first music video - and I'd like to get some feedback. The link is below. You can also check out my blog post on it at http://www.royerfilms.com/#!/2012/05/05/reel-shoot-music-video/ for more information. Thanks!

https://vimeo.com/34691494

 

[jghenderson]

Technically it's very well done. Nice lighting, nice location, good image quality and smooth shots.

Unfortunately, it's boring. Not only is the camera and editing style pretty slow (which is not in itself a bad thing), but it's the same thing over and over for 4 minutes. Nothing visually to break it up. Especially with a song like that, you need a story to go along with it, or you need to do some really interesting things visually.

You've obviously got the technical know-how, now you just need to push yourself creatively.