Vitamin Energy Spec Commercial

[Timothy Martin]

Let me know what you guys think of my commercial.

It is a spec commercial for Vitamin Energy and we shot it on the Sony ex-1 against a green screen.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GEdSdiO9bJs

 

[aalleexx]

I don't know man, feels like something is missing, personally didn't like the music
sounds like a porno or the black background

it's an energy drink, make it ENERGETIC !!!

just my thoughts poured out on html

 

[Timothy Martin]

Yeah man, I hear ya. We tried to keep it simple since this was a project for class with limited locations and time constraints. Thanks for the input, it's nice to hear honest opinions.

 

[aalleexx]

you are on the right track though love how super sharp the water looks, what was your shutter on those takes?