'Violet' Short Film

bkgarceau

bkgarceau

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My latest short film -

Violet

http://vimeo.com/1434056

I was the writer/director/editor. But I have to give some serious props, to my DP - Taylor Rudd (trudd), who shot the film with the Canon XH-A1 and with the Letus 35 and his set of lenses.
 
I didn't watch the whole thing. I had seen it somewhere before, probably just on vimeo.

The way you introduce the titles, the story is very good, great job on that
On the cinematography, few shots were out of focus. Where the boy and the girl meet by the beach (or whatever it was) and there are a couple of over the side shots, they needed to be more close, it looked a bit like careful attention wasn't taken with the framing. The acting was pretty good, it was an interesting story

Great job overall :D
 
Thanks a bunch!

Yeah we had some trouble with the Letus35 -- giving us some soft edges... something that's hard to monitor on the tiny Canon XH-A1 LCD -- That is the scene where its most obvious.
 
Wow i haven't finished this but I felt I needed to say something. Great Job man, and yes the cinematography is quite impressive. Was this shot in texas? Where abouts?
 
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