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killamill

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Hey guys, how are you?


I wanted to show all of you a video I did for a startup I'm gonna have live in a few days on Kickstarter.


This startup has nothing to do with cinematography.


i want show it to you, because I really look forward for some feedback on the video before I launch. If you have a minute, please let me know what you think.

It's a very important project for me.




Thank you tons in advance!
 
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killamill said:
Hey Guys, how are you?


I wanted to show all of you a video I did for a startup I'm gonna have live in a few days on Kickstarter.


This startup has nothing to do with cinematography.


i want show you, because I really look forward for some feedback on the video before I launch. If you have a minute, please let me know. It's a very important project for me.

(even something like this would probably help http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YsUTEIqoFOo)




Thank you tons in advance!
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I liked the video verry much.
But when you make a video where the audio (voiceover) is recorded separatly you can realy make shure that you get the best quality possible. I thougt the reverb took away some of the proffesional feeling of the video. What kind of room was it recorded in?
 
Lobbamobba said:
I liked the video verry much.
But when you make a video where the audio (voiceover) is recorded separatly you can realy make shure that you get the best quality possible. I thougt the reverb took away some of the proffesional feeling of the video. What kind of room was it recorded in?
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Thank you tons Lobbamobba! I know the sound is not as good as it should be. It was recorded on a home studio in different takes. Definitely not the best place to get professional results I guess. It doesn't bother me that much being for Kickstarter though. Do you think this could be a problem on some people?

Thank you again for your time!
 
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killamill said:
Thank you tons Lobbamobba! I know the sound is not as good as it should be. It was recorded on a home studio in different takes. Definitely not the best place to get professional results I guess. It doesn't bother me that much being for Kickstarter though. Do you think this could be a problem on some people?

Thank you again for your time!
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On some people, shure.
And since it is for kickstarter I wouldnt take any chanses and risk not getting the money for the project after all that hard work just because of the audio.
If its you reading or someone you know and have the possibilitie to just do retake it wouldnt be that difficult. You already have the script and the tone set so it would probably be done in one take.

But as a dog owner (my third) I must say that the project interests me verry much and I hope it realy turns out as a success for you.
 
Lobbamobba said:
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On some people, shure.
And since it is for kickstarter I wouldnt take any chanses and risk not getting the money for the project after all that hard work just because of the audio.
If its you reading or someone you know and have the possibilitie to just do retake it wouldnt be that difficult. You already have the script and the tone set so it would probably be done in one take.

But as a dog owner (my third) I must say that the project interests me verry much and I hope it realy turns out as a success for you.
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Thank you again for your help!...

The voice is mine. Also the guy at the beginning.

I'll definitely try to fix the audio.

Thank you very much for the best wishes. It's an important project for me, it's been almost 2 years since I started it.

I'll let you know when we are live :-)
 
Honestly, I think the imagery could much more powerful than it is, Four shots of the out of focus (bokah lights) in the intro is too long. I also think some powerful scenery of something industrial to beautiful would be beneficial in sale of your idea. Show a possible outcome of what it is your trying to push and how it will benefit the planet. Show a contrasting scene of the opposite, CONTRAST, it's all about contrast, you have to remember the majority of people are not artists and have a different perception than you. People need to see it both ways to visualize, just my two cents.
 
maranfilms said:
Honestly, I think the imagery could much more powerful than it is, Four shots of the out of focus (bokah lights) in the intro is too long. I also think some powerful scenery of something industrial to beautiful would be beneficial in sale of your idea. Show a possible outcome of what it is your trying to push and how it will benefit the planet. Show a contrasting scene of the opposite, CONTRAST, it's all about contrast, you have to remember the majority of people are not artists and have a different perception than you. People need to see it both ways to visualize, just my two cents.
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Thanks man! Thank you for taking your time and giving me your feedback! I really appreciate it!

You are right, it could be more powerful. I wanted to do something short and easy to watch.

The point of most of the people with different perception is very true. I'll keep in mind every word.

Thank you!
 
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