UPDATED: New demo reel

[churchie04]

I first posted my demo reel in this thread.

I just got done working on the pacing issues and mixing the footage around.

http://fenris.berry.edu/~aupchurch/Movies/AUPORTTEST.wmv
(Right-Click, Save-As)

• This is Un-CC'ed
• there improper cropping at the bottom
• this is not complete, just a test at improving the pacing.

If you watched this on my first try, please watch it again, and let me know what you think. That's the best way for me to improve it.

 

[churchie04]

My first try got pretty thouroughly shredded by the community. So I'd like to think i'm taking a step forward.

ANY help would be much appreciated.

 

[Justin_Kirch]

all the footage looks extremely grainy for me. nothing really catches my eye here. do you mostly do nature films? if so, i'd get more footage and bump up the chroma settings in camera to pop out colors more.

 

[greeches]

liked it much more, much faster! good work!

 

[Smithhouse]

Not bad, but I think you need a little more variety to spice it up a bit.