Unsuspect

Okay, first what I like.

- I like the shots, angles.
- The coloring choice is cool.
- Style of it was cool, I liked the split screen and thunder, though I'd like to see the side by side shots a little more symmetrical.

What I dont like

- 30 second intro?! (too long)
- The ending where the guy is contemplating the kill and gets shot? Take that out and it would fair better.
 
Thanks Eatsnax we had about 30 minutes to film the stuff yuh the intro i s i guess too long lotta people said that i guess i have to shorten it how long the intro should be on average? like 10 seconds ? but the end shot is the one that reveals the killer it wouldn't make sense otherwise who shot the first guy .
 
i don't know how to color the other guy maybe it can be done in photoshop rotoscoping or use mocha if anybody has any idea how to color the other guy pleas elet me know abd do share your knowledge
 
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