TWO NEW SHORTS! "Mannequin" and "vc2kh"

No offense, but these were hard to watch for more than ten seconds. The mannequin visuals were pointless and hard to make out. and the bus trip wasn't any better. I would hardly call these shorts. This is the type of footage you watch yourself, and reminisce. But people that don't know you really could care less about shaky grainy footage that has no significance to their life. Again no offense, not trying to be harsh, but truthful.
 
maranfilms said:
No offense, but these were hard to watch for more than ten seconds. The mannequin visuals were pointless and hard to make out. and the bus trip wasn't any better. I would hardly call these shorts. This is the type of footage you watch yourself, and reminisce. But people that don't know you really could care less about shaky grainy footage that has no significance to their life. Again no offense, not trying to be harsh, but truthful.
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thanks, it's ok. i know you aren't trying to be harsh. thanks for watching, and i hope you will enjoy my future work.
 
Looks like you're trying to be experimental, but not doing a good job at it. Sorry, but if you're doing experimental the point is to experiment with some sort of medium, with light, with the 4th wall, with sound, with something that entices us.

Even then I think experimental should be short and sweet, to the point, and really engage us, especially if there's no story. I see too many 'great' experimental works that just bore me because of this. Maybe I'm just not an Arteest.

Keep on trying.
 
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