Hey guys, would love some critique on my latest short film that I shot over the holidays!
Based on the feedback I've gotten on this film, what I'm trying to improve for my next short (which I'm super excited about) is the confusing and not very engaging story. The flashbacks did what I wanted, but set most of the film in the past, which makes the flow of time very odd. Let me know what you guys think.
Shooting this one was the biggest things I've done yet in terms of production. Designing the lighting for the night scenes and recording original music was pretty fun.
Feel free to check out my production team's channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/REXProducer
Thank you
Based on the feedback I've gotten on this film, what I'm trying to improve for my next short (which I'm super excited about) is the confusing and not very engaging story. The flashbacks did what I wanted, but set most of the film in the past, which makes the flow of time very odd. Let me know what you guys think.
Shooting this one was the biggest things I've done yet in terms of production. Designing the lighting for the night scenes and recording original music was pretty fun.
Feel free to check out my production team's channel: http://www.youtube.com/user/REXProducer
Thank you