Rocksteady
Active member
Hey guys, here's a short I did. Im usually not a big fan of spoofs but I think this one turned out pretty good. It's looks good anyway.
http://www.vimeo.com/5274221
http://www.vimeo.com/5274221
Twilight Spoof Short
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Andrew Brinkhaus
Veteran
Agree to disagree. Looks like you just dropped a Magic Bullet filter over everything, and the heavy diffusion and hot spot in the middle were really distracting, IMO. Shot composition jumped around a lot in the second location between a MS and CU, didn't cut very well in my eyes.
I think some of the bias just comes from how much I dislike the work/concept of that franchise. Even a spoof gives them too much recognition.
tmnt
King of Australia
Definitely a bad choice. However I found it to have some funny stuff (the hobo bit - not funny), like "Say it with an Australian accent". Laughed my ass off at that.
I'd say drop the diffusion with the hotspot (or use very selectively) and the hobo segment (keep how he's introduced though) and it'll be pretty cool.
Rocksteady
Active member
Thanks for the feed back guys!
How could I drop the hobo segment but keep how's he introduced? It wouldn't make sense just to cut to the guys saying now blow me. If I introduce him, I've got to show the audience at least some of the date. I think I could cut it down some. But yeah, it is a comedy short. Sorry if I didn't specify that.
How could I drop the hobo segment but keep how's he introduced? It wouldn't make sense just to cut to the guys saying now blow me. If I introduce him, I've got to show the audience at least some of the date. I think I could cut it down some. But yeah, it is a comedy short. Sorry if I didn't specify that.