Thanks Mrluffy. Yeah that would have been a good idea a pan and or zoom to see the ghost in full. I wanted to add a few more elements maybe even just sound design in the middle but simply didn't have time.
Good work. I agree that the skeleton could have been left out, but realize that you were trying things out. Also you're saucepan looked modeled and not quite round - maybe the mesh should have been subdivided a bit more? You had a nice sense of tension going walking into the room with the handheld camera though.
Congratulations on the film job. It does look like a big production. Cheers.
Jason