Trailer Rough Draft

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carlone

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Hey Guys,

Could you give me some feedback on this trailer dor our short. The short is done and edited and ready to send to replication - I'm just waiting on a trailer. I won't tell you about the project, hopefully the trailer tells the story. If not, please let me know.

By the way it was shot with the HXV primarily (with some DVX b cam footage). Also, some of the shots are using the M2.

(9-15-06 had to remove it due to bandwidth)
 
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Looks pretty good.. I'd do some color correction.. many of your scenes are very flatly lit, so do something with the contrast, darken it a bit.. remove some color.. I like the blue with the opening and closing shots.. use more of that dramatic tone throughout.. The guy on the phone "I would like you to go foward..." has a HUGE white hair in his nose.. It's pretty distracting.. lol and his "Of course you dont want evil...." is a bit poor acting wise.. you might want to pick another take, or goto some other shots, maybe using that audio if you need it..

Nice job though... Just chip away a bit more..
-- Justin
 
Thanks Justin,

I'll take your advise as we start carving on it this weekend.
Thanks for the feedback.
 
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