Trailer for sportbike documentary

Anyone have any comments on this trailer? I was going to show the finished documentary and a music video i did to a big production company in town it hopes it helps me secure an internship. Any advice before i show it would be appreciated.
 
For the most part, I think it has a great flavor. Thing is, in my opinion, from someone whose never seen a doc on sportbike stuntriding, I would like to see some more daring stuff right from the getgo. I mean, really engage me right from the beginning. The most interesting shi* you have, start with that.

Also, two shots before the interviewed guy says "I would like people to know just what stunt riding is"...you have a shot of a guy on a blue bike....it seems like he is about to DO something. But he doesnt. Either lose that shot altogether or replace it with a shot of something really cool or really engaging, like a stunt...

Thats just my take...

Rick
 
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