Trailer for short film 'Manifest Breakfast'

[OpticSugar]

Hello, so i just cut together a short teaser for my first short film. I'd like some opinions, good, bad or whatever. Does it make you want to see more? What do you get out of watching it from one viewing? Does ANY story line come across? I am trying to be somewhat ambiguous in this teaser... the story is about a man who loses his mind and the whole film depends on the build of intensity at the end so i don't want to give any of that away in the teaser. But is it interesting enough without giving any of that away?

(its a 1280x720 quicktime movie, so give it a minute to load

www.manifestbreakfast.com/trailer.mov

or

http://www.vimeo.com/3698226


Thanks!

 

[Ksun83]

Wow, please post when this is done. It looks interesting. What adapter and lenses did you use? Good work.

 

[OpticSugar]

Wow, please post when this is done. It looks interesting. What adapter and lenses did you use? Good work.

Thank you, we used two HVX200's, one with a Red Rock M2 and a assortment of nikon lenses. It was my first time using the red rock and i couldn't believe the difference in noise it produces, you lose so much light by throwing the adapter on but its definitely worth it, you can get rid of grain, but you cant fake depth in post... not convincingly anyways