Trailer for our upcoming short!!!

I liked the music a lot. Interesting concept. You never see women as the hit person.

I noticed in the opening shot of the teaser the flash of the gun looked pretty strong. Maybe if you go in and lower the opacity a tad. Overall, it looks very interesting. Let us know when the full film is available. I would love to see the rest of it.
 
Thank you Mattykins I will def. be whoring it around when it's completed. The girl who plays "Hitwoman" is a VERY good pianist and scored it as well wrote it so I'm lucky to have her as a partner.
 
Oh man. Well you are still alive right?

You never met my ex-girlfriend. She's insane. I wouldn't wish her on anyone. Now I only need to make a film about her.


And I can't wait to see it. You are indeed lucky to have her onboard. Looks like a great actress.
 
Very cool, heaps of work done here I see and it pays off cause the look is fantastic. It has a great story to it as well.
Hope it all goes well for you mate.
 
Man, when she hits my mans in the forehead with the butt of the pistol, that **** looked TOO real! Good job. Though I would never shoot a film on a DVX EVER because they ALL look like they were made in 1987. EVERY FEATURE I'VE EVER SEEN on this site shot on DVX's looks like early 90's film, regardless of what filter or color correction they do to it. I'm going straight for the red when I finish this script up.
 
Looking good there. Can I offer one small word of advice. In the opening trailer shot - I assume comes from the short itself, you have two extras that walk by. Extras in the shot are fine, but these people were in for too long IMO. Id have them close to the camera on action and quickly out of shot, I was wondering there who I should be looking at. Their purpose is to add life to the street, but they only need to be there for a split second. Sound seemed good and I thought the last tag line was great with the buzzing phone "I will be the last sound you hear". Nice work overall.
 
We actually went gorilla on that night and all the "extras" are actually just people walking by. We couldn't get a permit in time and we just went for it. But yea if I could go back I might have waited till they were closer to the camera and on their way out. But thanks for the kind words, I can't wait to finish this thing!
 
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