FEATURE: Trailer for Creature Horror, feedback needed

Whooah maybe a bit random with the story - a bit confusing? I get though that its a group of folks staying in a house where freaky **** will happen to them - but everything else was a bit blurry (which if its not that important - ie. to have folks talk about 'you had another brother' or what kinda seems like expositional stuff - then instead just gives us more freaky ****. Or sell more the vibe of your scary move. Maybe a bit overlong too?

This is just my opinion on the trailer - the film itself looks nicely shot, some cool stuff going on there, but i only got a glimpse of the monster - maybe more of the monster since its a well creature horror. After all there ain't no spoilers to worry about if there ain't no bums on seats hehe.

Nice work man on the film and congrats, ive just done a feature myself 'White Out' so i know the pain :)
 
lawriejaffa said:
Whooah maybe a bit random with the story - a bit confusing? I get though that its a group of folks staying in a house where freaky **** will happen to them - but everything else was a bit blurry Or sell more the vibe of your scary move. Maybe a bit overlong too?
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Thanks for the feedback. The main messages that I was hoping to communicate with it .. is that a family moves to a new house, the daughter invites boyfriend to house, he makes a bet with his friends that he can go all the way. There are monsters in the house and people die. Her brother has a pyschological issue and there is weird neighbors which maybe can add some intrigue or mystery.

I guess the most important question is does it create a sensation of uneasiness or fear or at least anticipation to see more?

As for the length. I prefer shorter trailers as well... it was requested by the sales agent for a longer 2 minute trailer. Maybe some preference with the foreign market?
 
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