trailer feedback

mcshyd

mcshyd

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I'm cutting together this trailer and would like some feedback. I can't do anything about how 'video' the footage looks so don't ask. Oh, and excuse the black bars, I outputted the wrong pixel size. Music and editing advice is very welcome. cheers..:beer:

http://www.blackmarketrobots.com/video
 
i agree, although it doesnt have a movie look, you have a good script oging for you, which in my opinion, is much more important than the visual.
 
haha, thanks yo. I didn't make this movie, caveh zahedi did. He just asked me to make the trailer... If you want a copy give me your contact and i'll email you instructions.
 
Nice trailer. I was reading about this movie not too long ago. It seems it has gotten some good attention. Is the film good? What I read about it made it sound interesting.

Nice pull.

-rook
 
You'll need to cut a trailer, not just a simple scene from the movie.
A trailer makes the viewer want to see the movie, not convey a simple scene. I learned nothing about the movie nor its charcs watching this trailer.
Keep on cutting... watch industry trailers to get ideas.
 
Hey man, it looks like a good movie. The trailer honestly needs to be revisited as it's long, a bit boring and did I say long? Seriously, cut it down, quicker edits and stuff.

btw, the chick who he's in threapy with is slamming!
 
coffee said:
Hey man, it looks like a good movie. The trailer honestly needs to be revisited as it's long, a bit boring and did I say long? Seriously, cut it down, quicker edits and stuff.

btw, the chick who he's in threapy with is slamming!
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it's 1 minute 30 seconds right now. that was too long for you? how old are you? lol, just kidding. I assume what youre telling me is that i spend too much time on the sequences i do have. thanks for the feedback.

PimpDaddyDA said:
You'll need to cut a trailer, not just a simple scene from the movie.
A trailer makes the viewer want to see the movie, not convey a simple scene. I learned nothing about the movie nor its charcs watching this trailer.
Keep on cutting... watch industry trailers to get ideas.
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well, it's actually a combination of 15 scenes, and honestly, a little more feedback would be great. all your really telling me is that you A, didn't really watch the trailer, and B, that it doesn't look like what you're familiar with. personally i take that as a good sign, and really don't want to mimic industry trailers. this is a small budget small crew independent movie. I'm not going to hire the movie voice guy and put flashes over all of my transitions.
 
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