Tommy Papercut (short film)

Looks alright, I'd just work on your transitions and introducing things like being late for work, but I guess thats in the actors court. But I'm still not sure if there is suppose to be a sequel cause there really wasn't a beggining or end.
 
Is there an ending?

I mean it's okay and all. Seemed like very little happened, and wasn't sure where you were going with the story. Is it a set up for a character or for another film?
 
Tpc

Tpc

ShortStop said:
Looks alright, I'd just work on your transitions and introducing things like being late for work, but I guess thats in the actors court. But I'm still not sure if there is suppose to be a sequel cause there really wasn't a beggining or end.
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ShortStop,

Thanks a lot for checking out Tommy Papercut. I really appreciate you taking the time to view and critique this little short.

Trey
 
Tpc

Tpc

Jon Starr said:
Is there an ending?

I mean it's okay and all. Seemed like very little happened, and wasn't sure where you were going with the story. Is it a set up for a character or for another film?
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Jon,

What's going on, man? Thank you for watching Tommy Papercut. The film is a stand alone short. There isn't a whole lot of context to it, but it's more like random fun.

Tommy Papercut is a man who forgets he has a job interview in 5 minutes. He flys into a panic and rushes as best he can despite missing half of his hair and running out of gas.

TPC!

Trey
 
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