Tolernace Trailer - Version #2

Thanks Matthew. We are sending it to Lions gate, Paramount, WB, and Universal.

We've only shot a trailer so far and if we cant raise the funds we cant shoot the film.

Ive got a music video that I'll post up sometime this week. My DP shot a really cool short for the upcoming sci-fi contest, which Ive seen a rough cut and it looks sweet. Thats about it for now. Thanks for all the comments.
 
Hey man, I haven't cut a trailer yet but I like what you guys have. The first edit that you posted a while back was blah to me but this one is so damn better! Good progress!
 
Thanks coffee. Its also shorter that the one a while back. That seemed to be the biggest problem with some people. Too long, bit too slow, so hope this one is better and continues to get better.
 
It was very good at first, but I think it needs a faster more erratic paced. For the situation it's a bit too controlled, I think the torture stuff was pretty good, but there was way too much slow down and basic dialogue. It should be more to the point, good opening visuals, you get your point across. Then explain the story a little, some more quick shots and then out.

Some really nice visuals, I just think that the mood and pacing are mixed badly. Definately need some disturbing music.
 
Kholi said:
Uhm.. don't you have that backward?

You make sure you have the VISUALS together before you cut MUSIC to them....

That's why it's called moving pictures... and not moving sound. You go to watch a movie, sound comes second though it's important as well.

With that said --

The sound was off, the actor's voices need tweaking. ADR time.

Otherwise, i'd say you put that damned DVX100 to good use.
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Man, are you rude. There is a better way to say stuff. You've got it backwards. That's so rude.
 
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