Smithhouse
Well-known member
Kevin... Watched the trailer a couple more times, and it really looks great... in regards to the Titles in the end. I would just try messing with the opacity a little just so it doesn't stand out so much being pure white... There a several spots in the trailer where you can cut in later or cut out earlier and not change the feel of it... Some dialogue can be cut as well without changing the message.
Also there are places that would benefit from something being said over something else that's happening... for example (what's happening with the new guys) Show the guy saying this on screen - but then cut away to the guy being hit when he says (have they talked yet)... You get the idea...
anyway, once again, great work.
Also there are places that would benefit from something being said over something else that's happening... for example (what's happening with the new guys) Show the guy saying this on screen - but then cut away to the guy being hit when he says (have they talked yet)... You get the idea...
anyway, once again, great work.
