Today was Thursday short

[brettsters]

I am a 16 year old highschool student and I helped to create this short. I was the director of photography. This is just a clip from the opening of the short. Tell me what you think.

http://homepage.mac.com/brettsters/iMovieTheater2.html

 

[Brad_Thames]

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Nice camera work. I especially like the B&W stuff.

 

[Kandinsky]

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Yeah i think the intro is quite nice. Especially this shot with the lil' girl and the fountain. Did you guys use a smoke machine or something for all this? Was it all 24p?

 

[Roy42]

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I remember seeing the trailer that had been posted on this site before, and I've been waiting to see more of it. It's very intriguing. I'm curious to see how the story works out.

Very nice camerawork, by the way. The outdoor shots are great. My favorite is the mailbox sequence.

 

[jumar]

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The opening sequence is beautiful. The classroom stuff needs some colour correction.

 

[Elvis]

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Can't wait to see the rest. I second the color correction on the clasroom scene 8)

 

[Mark_Monciardini]

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Loved the beginning also. But the classroom scene kills it. Not as creative as the beginning shots. Looks like a diffrent DP in the classroom Scene. Audio sounds like it needs an EQ boost.

Other then that, I think it's great. Nice work!

 

[VictorE]

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Looks nice Brett. The B&W scenes are well done. What settings, etc. did you use ? Please share some more info. thankshttp://www3.telus.net/public/a4a20294/YaBBImages/wink.gif

 

[Neil Rowe]

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looked good. will you be making the full thing available for download?