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I died laughing. My girlfriend was watching too and she said she wants one!

LMFAO
 
Wow, it's a relief (not in the potty way) that you guys laughed. I was getting nervous after cutting it that people might not find the idea funny. I wish I recorded the conversation with the Mary (the voice over artist) when I was trying to explain how I wanted her to act out the script or when I had to convince my Wife that it was funny to stand in front of the toilet and pretend to pee or when my daughter asked me what a Kinetica was.
 
Very creative and funny concept. Your serious and dry presentation of the product is what really makes it great. "Flow level" and "regulator" made me laugh very hard.

Good work!
 
Hehe, I liked how straight-faced this was delivered. I immediately recognized the style of commercial you were going for and it works well with the joke. Maybe my thinking is just a little off-kilter, but the word choice of "leg up" was also amusing to me for dog-and-fire-hydrant reasons. :)
 
I loved this idea because I actually had an idea of how to make one of these. You're in my head. Nice work.
 
Zoidoid said:
Hehe, I liked how straight-faced this was delivered. I immediately recognized the style of commercial you were going for and it works well with the joke. Maybe my thinking is just a little off-kilter, but the word choice of "leg up" was also amusing to me for dog-and-fire-hydrant reasons. :)
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Awesome!

I'm glad the staight-faced delievery worked. I had seconds thoughts about shooting it this way. I'm glad I didn't change it.


I put in a couple of key words that I hoped viewers would pickup including "leg up".
 
I wasn't crazy about the shot choices or the narration but the pay off made this one great.

Freaking brilliant.
 
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