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Beautiful shots.
Looks great.

The only feedback I would give you is that the titles (while I like the graphic style) seem a bit too difficult to read, both due to the size and the arc.

I would consider making them a bit more prominent.
But the shots themselves look really good, and the piece moves well.
Nice work.
 
Thanks for the replies guys. I'll take on board the text comments Luis but I didn't want a genreic lower third text they look sooooo boring.
 
really nice man. the only thing i didn't like about it was the music



( Same track i use in my DOP reel :P )
 
nicholasraeburn said:
Thanks for the replies guys. I'll take on board the text comments Luis but I didn't want a genreic lower third text they look sooooo boring.
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I totally agree, and I really like what you have - I wasn't suggesting at all that you go with 'generic lower thirds.'

What you have just seems a bit too small to me. I found the titles difficult to read.
But I would ask around and see what others think.
Obviously don't change anything based on one strangers opinion.
:thumbsup:
 
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