Thirsty?

colors are a little warm, but thats subjective; perhaps you were implying early morning? OK, good music and the camerawork was good to, but the editing could be a little faster. This has a spec commercial feel, so the shot with the espresso machine filling the glasses went on too long- perhaps cut it with some closeups of the coffee as it trickles down in that "guinness-esqe" fashion. just my opinion :)
 
The object of the short was to make the viewer want to sample the coffee you made...right? Well it worked! I think you did a great job. I loved the angles, the warmth and the music. Edweirdo thinks that the filling of the glasses went on to long but I disagree, it just make me long for some, watching as they filled up and looking soooo good.
 
I think the shots were well executed and the editing was pretty tight, but agree in that it seemed WAY too warm.
 
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