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Not bad at all. Not a blockbuster, but I watched the whole thing through, which is rare for me. Defiantely could put this in some festivals and get accepted for its non commercial value. Some of the sound effects can benifit from more work or money put into them. Othere than that good Job.
 
Thanks man - The soundtrack is actually being retooled as we speak - My sound guy threw that together for me in 3 nights - not to make excuses but I think he did what he could in the time that he had - we were entering this into a festival with a short deadline
 
I watched it all the way through too. I was enjoying the look of the office. Really nice office to shoot a shorty. Then BLAM we're out in the moutains which was very nice visually too. That scene out on the street was cool also. I really felt the explosion of the balloon as if the entire street heard it too. Good DOF in a few shots. I was laughing at the beginning when his computer crapped on him because I could relate and I'm sure a lot of your audience will too. I think "the boss" made the story much more entertaining as it would have been pretty boring with the editor running around without anyone there to annoy the hell out of him and put pressure on him to reach his goal. Festival audiences will enjoy this. Good luck with it and thanks for showing it here........ Oh! one thing.... Its a big time "no no" to have voice over at the begining of a movie and then not having any more of it. Audiences expect to hear him talking to us again and when he doesn't it's dissapointing. I learned this from several heavy hitter screenwriters. Just a tip I'm passing on to you. Good luck again.
 
Like it! Watched it through. Nice FX and cool locations. Good actor. Pretty good one!
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