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RadioRocket

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Hey guys,
I thought I'd share a short film I recently submitted to a local 24 hour film fest.
Let me know what you guys think!
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I AGREE


I had to include the following 4 elements:
- the theme of superstition
- the sound effect of a bell
- the line "third times the charm"
- a "lucky charm"
 
Interesting little film. I thought hte story was a little disjointed. I mean you could tell it was a film where you had several points you had to hit, but honestly for such a tight time contstaint its kinda hard not to.

I would have liked to see a more varied shot selection especially in the sitting positions like in the restraunt /coffee shop, but other than that no major complaints.

The dialogue seemed a little flat especially at the beginning but i couldnt tell if that was your actors or not.

I am impressed you were able to get a nice film like this in such a short time.

My fav shot is him sinking in the bathtub, really nice composition IMO.

keep it comming
 
Thank you for the constructive criticism. I'm the girl with the red hat. All the actors/actresses in this are just friends and do not want to pursue acting, so yeah.

Thank you for your kind words :)
 
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