"The script" short film footage (updated)

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Danielxm

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Hi Guys,

After messing around with squeezers and hosting servers, I've manage to get my film footage online. Please note that is unfinished (90% on the way), and there is still some tunings to be done in color correction, music, counter at the right,.. (and of course change outkast music at the credits :) )

This is a downloadable version,28MB. Hope you enjoy, this is my first film. Updated version, subtitled:

http://www.streamload.com/danielxm/films/The_Script_subtitled.mov

Resume:  The story is about a young student writer "Jorge" who needs to make a film in 5 minutes. He than smashes into a famous filmwriter home office asking help. The astonished writer "CID", helps "Jorge" after realising that "The script" they are doing is actually the film being shown "film of the film concept". How will they manage to write the script in 5 minutes? Throung rewind/forward of the film and accelaration technics they finally end accomplishing their objective.

For screen grabs, please follow the topic:
http://www.dvxuser.com/cgi-bin/DVX2/YaBB.pl?board=Clips;action=display;num=1095137452
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

Daniel,

This was really great! Story, acting, camera lighting. Everything.
Well done man!!!

Now, deixa de ser preguicoso and add some subtitles because it isn't fair for the others.

I really liked everything. The story going back to the past and moving to the future. Brilliant!!!

All the best

Fidel.
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

Forgot to say about the part where Jorge tells Cid that he should do some courses.

That was really funny!!!

All the best

Fidel.
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

Very nice work. How did you get that rotating overhead shot at the beginning?
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

Hi Guys,

Thanks!

Araujo, will try to get the subtitles the sooner!

Disjecta, I used dollys and mini-jibs on the shots. The rotating shot was done with a mini-jib (set at 9'higth) and 2 heads attached to it, one above the other. The set up of the two heads made it possible for the camera to fully tilt down for framing, and I just had to manually pan the below head(the one attached to the mini-jib) to get the effect.
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

it looked really good, if only I could understand it...
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

Okay thanks, I'm looking forward to the subtitled version :D
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

Ditto on everything Disjecta said. Nicely done and can't wait until I can understand what's being said. ;D
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

The plot sounds dynomite.

err, DY-NO-MITE!
 
Re: "The script" short film footage

Re: "The script" short film footage

Ok Guys!

Got the subtitled verison link re-published on the first post. Enjoy!

uuooohhh! Am I tired? Yeah! kept doing the dubtitles, I mean subtitles till 3 am! hehe :P

Ok, I learned a lesson. Never to publish abroad w/o subtitles. hehe

hhmm At least this is not necessary for video-clips!! Or is it? ;D
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

I had trouble getting it to play. Is there a problem with it?
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

Creative dialog, and nicely done.

jmf
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

There we go. nice work!!!!
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

Very nice work. I enjoyed it immensely. I just realized my Spanish is extremely rusty. ;)
 
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[quote author=24k Black link=board=Clips;num=1095865100;start=0#13 date=09/24/04 at 20:59:09]Very nice work.  I enjoyed it immensely.  I just realized my Spanish is extremely rusty.   ;)[/quote]

:D
 
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Re: "The script" short film footage

Great work!

Totally pro...

-Jerry
 
Re: "The script" short film footage (upd

Re: "The script" short film footage (upd

;D

Thank you all guys! I know it is not flowless but a good enough work for a first timer.  ::)

ellegrand, not yet. Send you one when I get it.

Have learned a lot from this work(well think we always are) and will hopefully post new one´s sooner.

Btw, met Taubkin the other day(great guy & dvx member) and we are going to shoot a video-clip. Let you know more details later!  ;)
 
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