"The Roommate"

[CaptainWhacky]

Sketch shot on the dvx in about 45 minutes. Has some harsh language.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Mz48SCOCJs

Thoughts and comments are much appreciated.

 

[ugafan]

i had two problems with it.
1. it was essentially the same joke repeated over and over.
2. it took too long to get to the punchline.

 

[flipsidekrew]

(O.O) i agree with ugafan. It wasnt that climatic.

 

[dangal]

totally agree with ugafan

 

[CaptainWhacky]

Here's a version that's 40 seconds shorter that I sent in to ebaums.

http://emuse.ebaumsworld.com/video/watch/19679