"The Librarian" short film trailer

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Hi everyone,

We're wrapping up post on a 25min short film entitled "The Librarian" we shot with the DVX100A this summer. The Black & White short is about a mousy librarian who becomes entangled in a deadly cat and mouse game with two professional killers on Valentine's day.

http://www.mankindpictures.com/thelibrarian.html

Just click on "Trailer" to check it out in WMV format. Thanks and enjoy!
 
It looks a little too cutesy for me. It's a little distracting to be using a highly stylized font with an almost vintage movie style of telling your story (at least in the trailer)...

My initial impression is that if these are some of the best scenes from the movie, it doesn't have much substance. This may not be the case, and I don't mean to be offensive, but you should consider putting a little more variety and tension in your trailer...as it is right now, it looks scattered...in terms of style and cohesion.
 
hey you crossed the 180 line in the convo between the girls. nicely done though for the most part. I agree with Disjecta on his points.
 
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