FEATURE: The Legend of Seven Toe Maggie

Looks great, looking forward to this one. There's a dead spot in the middle of the trailer in terms of pacing. Trailer is spot on until 1.10 up to the point the guy smiles. From there you should go straight to the high impact horror elements from 1.20 or later. The scenes in 10 secs or so in between don't serve the purpose and suck out the tension. Less is more, having hinted at the legend and shown the present you just need to jump straight to the promise of scares and you're done. Having followed this project I'll be interested in a copy when you're done.
 
I didn't do the poster, I hired someone to do it. Thanks everyone for the feedback.. trailer editing is something I've still yet to get a full grasp on.
 
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