Not sure what the point of making the granny like that was, but it was ok for a few LOL's. He still looked pretty manly though, but you did have a whole Mommas Family thing going on.
The one thing i didnt like was the lighting, it jsut didnt look right and looked kinda amatuerish. Im guessing maybe some color grading could help you. (i know its hard to get a dynamic look out of florecesnt top lights in the store)
I liked your special effects, what did you do them in?
honestly there was no point, my friend had the idea to shoot it so we shot it in about 2 or 3 hours and threw it together just for kicks and for something to do to take a break from our feature film. yeah there was simply no lighting, we just ran in the store and shot it as quick as we could, we didnt take too much time on something we wanted to shoot really quick, and the grandmother was supposed to still look pretty manly, I thought that it would be pretty funny. special effects in after effects and ame2