The Clock of Life

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Short film shot for a school assignment. I am pleased with the result.

I appreciate any and all constructive criticisms. Thanks!



Eric
 
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Good job. Moody in the right way. Your lead actor had just the right quality. What's the name of the piano piece?
 
Thanks, the the song is "Quinn's Song: A New Man" by Kevin Macleod
 
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Pretty good, i like the shots, to much black space opening though, your first image doesnt show till like 13 or 14 seconds and on a 2 min short thats at least 2x to much.

You really like cereal huh? lol, second film ive seen you use it in. Not a bad thing, just an obvservation. Hell Akira Kurosawa really liked rain, just one of those things.

Your outside shots are a little better than your inside ones. How did you get people to let you shoot in the mall?

What camera were you using? Also good audio track, was it original or did you borrow from anywhere?

jon
 
Yeah, the opening over black was not planned for, so it was tacked on at the end. Could have executed it better.

The escalator shots were in Barnes & Nobles. We were in and out before they even had a chance to object.

The music is by John Macleod and it was taken from his online collection of royalty free music.

Thanks

Eric

Edit: We shot on the HMC-150
 
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