Pretty good, i like the shots, to much black space opening though, your first image doesnt show till like 13 or 14 seconds and on a 2 min short thats at least 2x to much.
You really like cereal huh? lol, second film ive seen you use it in. Not a bad thing, just an obvservation. Hell Akira Kurosawa really liked rain, just one of those things.
Your outside shots are a little better than your inside ones. How did you get people to let you shoot in the mall?
What camera were you using? Also good audio track, was it original or did you borrow from anywhere?