I posted my first two short movies here some time ago and received some very helpful comments, so I also want to present you my third one.
It's basically the final version, yet it is not released to have a week or so to check for possible improvements.
It would be very nice if you could give me some of your thoughts about it (feel free to be honest, so my I can improve and you may have some fun watching my future projects).
The last time I got the advice to not film it in english but in my native language and add subtitles for a more natural feeling and avoid strong accents and bad english, which I did this time.
It's basically the final version, yet it is not released to have a week or so to check for possible improvements.
It would be very nice if you could give me some of your thoughts about it (feel free to be honest, so my I can improve and you may have some fun watching my future projects).
The last time I got the advice to not film it in english but in my native language and add subtitles for a more natural feeling and avoid strong accents and bad english, which I did this time.