SHORT: The Acropolis Syndrome
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Rickyartis14
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nice
It's good you take "the risk" for making a film.
But.... a few remarks
In general, I miss sound.... music is ok, but music may not be a "BIG layer" on top of it hiding all the rest
0:56 --> the green shirt guy looks into the camera....
remember that EVERY shot has a purpose. I know in movies you sometimes see some shots of something not according to the movie... But...that's just an idea...Every shot does accord with the movie.
Falling dead is not easy.... being dead neither.... It's something everyone thinks 'naaa, it's a piece of cake", but actually it isn't.
Storywise there's some idea in it...But a little "weak" yet. I have more a "ooh nooo !!!" feeling when you watch neighbours, CSI, NCIS,....
But.... a few remarks
In general, I miss sound.... music is ok, but music may not be a "BIG layer" on top of it hiding all the rest
0:56 --> the green shirt guy looks into the camera....
remember that EVERY shot has a purpose. I know in movies you sometimes see some shots of something not according to the movie... But...that's just an idea...Every shot does accord with the movie.
Falling dead is not easy.... being dead neither.... It's something everyone thinks 'naaa, it's a piece of cake", but actually it isn't.
Storywise there's some idea in it...But a little "weak" yet. I have more a "ooh nooo !!!" feeling when you watch neighbours, CSI, NCIS,....
realflorian
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Thanks For Writing all that 
Actually it could have been way better but i had some problems.... It took us 2 hours to walk up the mountain and we were tired... And after it started raining so... Anyway thanks for watching
Actually it could have been way better but i had some problems.... It took us 2 hours to walk up the mountain and we were tired... And after it started raining so... Anyway thanks for watching realflorian
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Nice job overall, i didnt like it as much as the last one you did, the one with the robot kid. I think the story could have been a little tighter, there were times i wasnt sure what was going on exactly.
I think overall it would have flowed a little better as a shorter piece, maybe trim 60-90 seconds off. Shots were pretty good, especially liked the opening sequence.
I agree about the fact that sound would have increased the production quailty a lot.
I think overall it would have flowed a little better as a shorter piece, maybe trim 60-90 seconds off. Shots were pretty good, especially liked the opening sequence.
I agree about the fact that sound would have increased the production quailty a lot.