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jaredgiese

jaredgiese

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This is a completely amateur film and I plan on doing nothing with it at all. It was strictly for fun and I am not looking for any harsh criticism because I know for a fact it isn't up to par with most of the films on here.

So that being said just watch it for entertainment purposes, and rate or comment on it please! :)

Length: 7:45
Actors: Jared Giese and Joshua Gibson

Equipment used:

Camera: Sony DCRVX2000
Shotgun Microphone: Rode NTG-3 (powered with an ARTII phantom power supply, no mixer)
Camera audio adapter: Beachtek XLR-1/8"
Editing Program: Sony Vegas Pro

Filming Location: Albuquerque, NM

Here are the two videos (two parts to the movie):


Part 1: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_W4m8pHS620

Part 2: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jmo0svRkA7s
 
I thought is was funny. You must have had a lot of fun making it (I can tell).

Something for next fun project like this: the comedy aspects of it (sleeping with the deer statue for example and the evil voice in the garage) and the more serious stuff combine a bit more confusing than you'd probably were aiming at. Maybe more clearly decided parodie/satire next one?

grtz
Jasper
 
It was a blast making it, only took 2 half days.

I see what you mean though about how it was kinda funny at first then all of a sudden serious, there should have been a better transition.

Thanks for the feedback.
 
This was VERY stiff. To much camera on tripod, not enought movement. To many mid shots and not enough wide, and almost no close up shots. You did have a few decent shots, one being where the bigger guy puts on his shades.

I couldnt tell where you were going with it at first, i mean the mood you wanted to create. I couldnt tell if it was supposed to be serious with a little humor, or humours with a little realism.

Keep going, i liked your overall concept. But the pacing was a little slow, i think you could edit a minute or so out.

jon
 
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