Temptation

[spotlightpro]

I had to do a short illustration of someone being tempted and giving in. This was my first shot at it. I know it won't look its best because it's on youtube, but I am curious as to anyone's thoughts on it. Yes - I know the lighting's bad.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XQhFyGb3cAw

 

[Artscroll]

I thought it was fun. I think it is a testimony to talent having to stretch something to six plus minutes that takes place all in a small apartment. Good idea. My favorite part was when he was at the sink drinking from the cup. Good facial expressions and acting there. I also liked the blue light coming from outside the door/window. You could use a bit more "color" in the short. Some of the camera angles were nice and artistic. He certainly lasted a lot longer than I could have!

 

[dangal]

seriously this is the funniest movie to be put on this site.
loved every second

 

[spotlightpro]

Thanks for the comments guys. I had fun shooting this. I did this awhile back and knowing a bit more about lighting and the camera I would definitely agree w/ giving it a little more color.