SHORT: Suprise Party! (15 year old director)

[UncleKornicob]

I am 15, and I think im getting the hang of this.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uKFQhWlVSPw
I edited, and directed.
I realize there are a few some-what major mistakes, like that last scenes, you see people where the not supposed to be in cuts, there was nothing I could really do to edit differently, other then delete that whole part in general.
Any one have a suggestion for a better name?

 

[Searcher]

Ha that was fun! Well done. There are a few story problems such as why didn't the birthday boy recognise his friend that tried to stall him out on the street? But that's nit picking.

If it was me I would probably just call it Surprise!

Or maybe The Best Party Ever!

Or Party Time! Awesome!

Or Surprise or How I learned to Start Worrying and Hate Parties.