jpbankesmercer
Director Mod
Acting: Liked your leading lady!
Script: A little lite, wanted more of an explanation towards the end.
Direction: Some lovely framing here and use of DOF.:thumbup:
Music: Nice.
Editing: Tight, great inter-cuts.:thumbup:
Lighting: Lovely use nature lighting didn’t like the purple haze on the body. I see what you’re trying to do by making a clear distinction between both though.
Loved: The titles, how that stalk bent back right near the camera, the walk thru when she watering the plants, (Steadicam or Glidecam?), DOF when she’s playing with her hair, make-up on the dead body shot’s, walk-thru shot into the backdoor, (nice man), the credits and end shot.
Hated: The purple filter on the death shots.
Overall: A very well shot piece, if you had a really tight script to work from you’ll be killer. I see moments of genius in your work.
J.P.
PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS ON 'BROKEN CIRCLE' (THANKS!)
Script: A little lite, wanted more of an explanation towards the end.
Direction: Some lovely framing here and use of DOF.:thumbup:
Music: Nice.
Editing: Tight, great inter-cuts.:thumbup:
Lighting: Lovely use nature lighting didn’t like the purple haze on the body. I see what you’re trying to do by making a clear distinction between both though.
Loved: The titles, how that stalk bent back right near the camera, the walk thru when she watering the plants, (Steadicam or Glidecam?), DOF when she’s playing with her hair, make-up on the dead body shot’s, walk-thru shot into the backdoor, (nice man), the credits and end shot.
Hated: The purple filter on the death shots.
Overall: A very well shot piece, if you had a really tight script to work from you’ll be killer. I see moments of genius in your work.
J.P.
PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS ON 'BROKEN CIRCLE' (THANKS!)
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