SHORT: Succumb

Enjoyable and very pro in a lot of ways. Great look. Nice color. Nice location choices. Wonderful space ship ... inside and out.

It's obvious in some places that the voice was re recorded and the vocal delivery was somehow very predictable after a point. Unnatural? Maybe. Hard to pin it down. It's just a feeling like there wasn't much spontaneous talk going on.

The light saber scene was weak. More rehearsal, faster action, a few different camera angles, more short takes etc. would have fixed a lot of it.
And then also fix the parts where the light saber fx were iffy.

All in a I think it's an exceptional effort.
 
I don't like the "hiss" sounds in the ADR.. Also the ADR is not 100% sync..

If you like I can trie to match it better and remove the "hiss" sound....
 
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