We did this little flick as a training film. Tested out some actors and fight choreography styles. Also smoke and after effects practice. Tried to keep it entertaining though even with no plot.
There was some real visceral shots and violent moves. Good stuff though I think you could improve the editing a bit. Certain clips ran a few frames long and that has the impact of deflating the excitement and tension when it comes to action.
5 angles to film 3 punchest and throw is way way too much, you cut for no reason, each cut must be for some reason, now its kinda cut just for the sake of having each filmed take in final edit.MAny shots are too close and we cant see what shes doin.
Also youre making films quite awhite but you kinda dont care about lighting, its first most important thing you should look into, buy photography reflectors at least and use them whenever you can cause even if you have super awesome choreography then it still looks like filmed in random place with random light and is not cinematic.