Student Film Finished

[mdslammer]

Hi guys,

I just finished my final exam film for the Video/Film I class I'm taking at my local community college.
I'm definitely not happy with the way it turned out, but I did the best I could.
I can at least pic out what I did wrong and what I need to improve upon.

The film had to be 90 seconds in length, 30-45 shots, no dialog, music and SFX were allowed.

If you are so inclined: www.markdalzell.com/karma.htm


Mark Dalzell / AudioScapes
Las Vegas, NV

 

[Jay Rodriguez]

Hey man, that wasn't as bad as you think it was. I mean there's a few technical things that should of been taken care of while filming but the story is there.

 

[mdslammer]

Coffee,

Thanks for taking time to view it and your comments.

Mark

 

[filmgeek]

pretty good. I liked the laugh it was creepy. And that is a technical term.

 

[clipsmoke]

i liiked it. pretty cool. stop downing urself lol

 

[Jon Starr]

Not bad. Not great, but not bad.

Main problem is that it was too fast. One thing happens, then we go to another, then another. No time to build up tension. Is it because of a time restriction?