Strip - trailer for a short film about stripping

I liked the look of the club scenes. The exterior car shot of the girl and the guy in the hoodie looked a little hot to me exposure wise. I also feel the dialog is buried in the mix with the music. Overall I liked the look you have going.
 
Looks nice but the sound design needs too be flushed out a lot more.... maybe adding some additional background audio would make it feel a bit more seedy and real.... clanking drinks, shoots from the patrons.. that kind of thing too create more atmosphere.
 
Thanks all! Agreed with the audio and such, we had a pretty strict deadline for this trailer and as such didn't have alot of time to get a nice mix on it. The reason the exposure on the girl is a bit hot is because that shot was originally intended to be the closeup of the guy, but for the trailer the delivery of the line worked better from that angle. I suppose we probably could've used a bounce or something to better even out the contrast between her face and his. :)

Thanks again!
 
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