PegLeg Media
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Stream of Consciousness
A short film about 2 people fading in and out of consciousness. Filmed with a GH2 in 1 day.
This is the first draft to my short film. Its very rough and I am not happy with it right now. I'm looking for any feedback or suggestions to help make this a more entertaining short. It is made just for the web so it doesnt have to be perfect but I dont make a lot of short films so know somebody will have some good advice. Any music or SFX suggestions. Any ways to cut it better or shots to throw in? I'm just hitting a writers block with the editing stage. Thanks everyone!
https://vimeo.com/76274805